Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Mustafa Kemal Atatürk (May 19 ,1881-November 10.1938). Atatürk was a Turkish army officer , 1st President of Turkey, 1st Prime Minister of Turkey, 1st Speaker of Parliment of Turkey, and 1st Leader of Repablican Peopl's Party. Ataturk is knowing only one Ottoman commander during Word War 1. He led the Turkish movement in the Turkish war of Independence. The time when Ataturk was a president, he made program of political, economical and cultural reform. Mustafa Kemal changed former Ottoman Empire into a modern, democratic, nation-state.

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  1. Don't start your first sentence with a pronoun. Use his name.

    and 1st (AA)

    Don't repeat "and" all of those times in the same sentence. You only need to write it before the last item that you list.

    Repablican Peopl's (spelling)

    Ataturk ____is_____ known the only Ottoman commander

    he made program of (AA)

    changed former (AA)

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