- TURKEY IS SO CLOSE TO MY COUNTRY, BUT I HAVE NEVER BEEN THERE. MANY OF MY FRIENDS FROM UKRAINE HAD A GREAT TIME AT BEAUTIFUL TURKISH BEACHES. ONE TIME I ALMOST BOUGHT A TOUR IN TURKEY, BUT IN MY FAMILY OPINION IS DANGEROUS TO GO THERE BY MYSELF. RIGHT NOW I AM WORKING WITH A LOT OF PEOPLE FROM TURKEY AND THEY TOLD ME A LOT ABOUT THEIR COUNTRY . THAT IS WHY I AM SO INTERESTED TURKEY. WHAT IS GOING ON IN THAT OASIS.
Masha, I really don't know a lot about Turkey so I am really interested in what you will tell us :o)
ReplyDeleteHey Maria,
ReplyDeleteYour blog looks great! I look forward to learning about Turkey.
A few suggestions for you:
. Change the title of your blog from "you" to "your" so the grammar is correct. Click on "customize" in the top right corner. Go to "settings" and then change your title.
Oy TURKEY, TURKEY, TURKEY.
. Change "Oy" to a word that is in English
. I Never have been there (Word order)
. There.Many (add 2 spaces after every period)
. all most = almost
. but in my family opinion (omit a word and make family possessive)
. My family's opinion _____ (verb)
. my self = myself
. they telling me (wrong tense)
. there country (spelling)
. interesting (wrong form)
. interested + _______ (add a word)
. omit "about"
. omit "out" in "going out" and choose another word
. No question mark at the end of the sentence